Video Evaluations Round 2(Due 5/4)

Assignment: Show video to at least 5 people (not in this class) your video. Summarize the demographic information about them and what feedback they had. Then update your video based on their feedback and provide a 200-300 word summary of what you changed based on this feedback.

Demographic Info & Feedback

Colored items are items that were implemented

Viewer 1

  • Demographic Information
    • Age: 31
    • How much do you know about Wonder Woman from wonder woman comics: I know a lot about them, and am a huge fan!

  • Feedback
    • What things in the video make sense?
      • The additional screen display is very well thought approach. 

    • What things in the video are confusing?
      • There is nothing confusing in the video

    • Where is there too much detail?
      •  I think that the level of detail is actually very good. 

    • Where is there too little detail?
      •  I think that the level of detail is actually very good. 

    • What does the technology do?
      • attacks enemy with lighting strike to stop them from invading the village

    • How did the user interact with it?
      • Uses a touch screen to choose options on the device

    • What other recommendations do you have?
      • I feel like there are to many controls on the interface, like for every single step the user is using a button to do the work. You can add more screen while giving background of wonder woman.

Viewer 2

  • Demographic Information
    • Age: 23
    • How much do you know about Wonder Woman from wonder woman comics: I know several things about them
  • Feedback
    • What things in the video make sense?
      • The idea of showing every single step for the working of the bracelet.
    • What things in the video are confusing?
      • While telling the story you said the mission accomplishes is shown on the screen but did not find any screen attached for that.
    • Where is there too much detail?
      • There was none
    • Where is there too little detail?
      • There was none
    • What does the technology do?
      • Stops  enemy from attacking
    • How did the user interact with it?
      • They use a touch screen and interact with their fingers
    • What other recommendations do you have?
      • Maybe edit the sound a little bit, some places the level of volume was different.

Viewer 3

  • Demographic Information
    • Age: 26
    • How much do you know about Wonder Woman from wonder woman comics: I know several things about them
  • Feedback
    • What things in the video make sense?
      • It all made sense

    • What things in the video are confusing?
      • Ares being a man why has female voice.

    • Where is there too much detail?
      • the device is user friendly so no instructions needed on how to use it.

    • Where is there too little detail?
      • There was the right amount of detail

    • What does the technology do?
      • help save common people from enemy

    • How did the user interact with it?
      • pressing the touch screen of the bracelet.

    • What other recommendations do you have?
      • you can use background music or stress for few portion which are important. First two  slides are too much of story telling than pictures.

Viewer 4

  • Demographic Information
    • Age: 23
    • How much do you know about Wonder Woman from wonder woman comics: I know several things about her
  • Feedback
    • What things in the video make sense?
      • It was all pretty clear

    • What things in the video are confusing?
      • why is there no role of villagers (I clarified saying the device was originally as well as  in the assignment given needs to be used by a user and operated by the user, moreover their was no function of villagers related to the bracelet.)

    • Where is there too much detail?
      • I think there was a good level of detail throughout the video. Everything went at a good pace

    • Where is there too little detail?
      • Wanted to get to know the character more but that’s fine till the process is clear it makes relevant why the character is doing so

    • What does the technology do?
      • protects you from enemy attack

    • How did the user interact with it?
      • She used a touch screen to interact with it

    • What other recommendations do you have?
      • Use smooth flow from one screen to next using better animation and visual effects

Viewer 5

  • Demographic Information
    • Age: 29
    • How much do you know about Wonder Woman from wonder woman comics: I know a lot about her, and am a huge fan!
  • Feedback
    • What things in the video make sense?
      • the way the story is narrated makes it very easy to understand
    • What things in the video are confusing?
      • why is the user using the screen at all which is not part of the original story
    • Where is there too much detail?
      • There were no points where I felt it was info overload
    • Where is there too little detail?
      • I would like to see how the screen looks when wonder woman successfully kills her enemies
    • What does the technology do?
      • The technology allows user to protect the village against ill people
    • How did the user interact with it?
      • Touch Screen on the bracelet
    • What other recommendations do you have?
      • make it more colorful

Changes made based on Feedback

Video shown: https://youtu.be/iH452VBFt6M

Edited video after critiques: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tje12XuKbiI
Colored items above are items that were implemented

I was a little worried that the changes from last week were so significant that my viewers this week would not have any feedback to give. However, I was relieved to receive more great feedback for my video this week.

But there was actually huge number of changes being made for this round. In the last round in the second slide I mentioned that wonder woman  “is” used  to live in  a village called amazon. Thanks to one of my viewer who pointed this grammatical mistake out.
Again as pointed out by another viewer that when we select a button on a screen it generally gets changed from red to green, but is it something opposite happening in my video, so I took care of it and showed that when wonder woman clicks on the ” attack mode” it gets changed from red to green.
Another significant change I made was the addition of a screen shot all together which says “mission accomplished”, this I should say is a real good observation that once the work is successfully done the device should give a signal to the user to confirm its been handled. Not to mention there are several screen and narration being added on public demand to make sure that the video makes sense to all, which again required changes in animation and visual effects and while narrating I added background music this time to focus on the impact of few slides.

I have showed the working screens of the bracelet on single separate screen unlike last time, where I showed all the screen as pop-up on the side of the user’s hand. So for all these changes I had to write a new script so as to give it a new look or make it sound little different from the previous version which I felt was little monotonous.(This is absolutely my thinking as I have heard my video over and over again).

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